Great finally someone who writes in english just like me.
I somehow get the feeling your not much of a Ran advocate. But Shiho really got the message across.
Moreover you greatly convey Shiho's commitment for Shinichi. Intensely sentimental & profound.
One question remains: When you wrote Chris, did you mean Vermouth, or did I misinterpreted something? Ah, and it shoudld be Jodie & Yūsaku not Jody & Yousako!
I would take mischievous pleasure, if I would come upon a comment on your part.
Constructive criticism dearly wished-for.
Keep up your good work!